Saturday, 28 February 2015

Forget me not!

I loved you a lot
But you let my heart weep and blot.
Then, the tears clot.
Slowly, your memories rot.
And, all I have to say is – Forget me not!

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16 comments:

  1. pooja mahimkarFebruary 28, 2015 11:38 am

    At times it's better just to forget about it.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2015 12:34 pm

    :'(
    Love is pain...

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  3. SGFebruary 28, 2015 5:44 pm

    He/She is not worth a single thought.

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  4. Ashwini C NMarch 01, 2015 4:13 pm

    When others do not reciprocate what we feel, we should move on.

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  5. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 01, 2015 6:54 pm

    I guess time heals us and we should let it do its work..

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  6. Anilkumar KurupMarch 02, 2015 3:06 pm

    After all that?

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  7. Sumana RoyMarch 02, 2015 5:32 pm

    i find a playful note here....

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  8. Jae RoseMarch 02, 2015 7:13 pm

    A sweet little kiss goodbye...and a triumphant one perhaps also

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  9. kaykualaMarch 02, 2015 8:27 pm

    Never to give up for a loved one! Little distractions will always show up as little irritants!

    Hank

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 03, 2015 2:10 am

    Totally the other person's loss, kiddo. I like the humor in the rhyming.

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  11. G L MeisnerMarch 03, 2015 2:45 am

    Good use of rhyme. Funny poem.

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